From my draft of the contents page and double page spread somebody in my class assessed what I did well and what I could do to improve in the future:
My peer assessor said that 'you understood how there can be great cohesion throughout a magazine through coverstars, fonts and the attitude of the articles'... 'I like where you have placed the pull quotes and how you have put the coverstar in the centre of the contents'.
To achieve marks my peer assessor said that 'you can draw ideas from the positioning of the coverstar and distribution of text and image'.
To improve on my drafting, my peer assessor said that I should 'keep in mind how mixmag lays out their magazine, think about proportions and maybe use a different font that's more dynamic for the pull quotes unless it goes against the ethos of the magazine'.
To improve and achieve on my final music magazine I will think about how typical mixmag magazines use the codes and conventions so they will be reflected in my magazine. I could also stick to the ethos of my magazine and take better quality images and edit them to make them distinctive to all secondary images in my magazine.
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