Remake, remodel feedback

After peer assessment, my peer assessor commented that:
'The cover lines are laid out well around the face of the main cover star and the house colours comply with the ethos of the magazine. This can be used for your final magazine because the template is very successful in matching with the style of the magazine.'

My peer assessor also said that I had successfully included the conventions of layout and design:

• Masthead
• Pugs
• Puffs
• Dateline
• Main image
• Cover lines
• Bar code
• Selling line

I have successfully included elements of music mise-en-scene:

• Costume
• Hair
• Makeup
• Facial expressions
• Lighting
• Colour

My peer assessor concluded the framing of the shot (the close up) worked really well and is a typical finding of music magazine covers.

In my next draft of my front page I will need to take all of the above into account and use it to my advantage because it's good advice and I can now see that there is room for improvement. I am happy with the criticisms because it'll make me look at my work more closely in the future.