First draft feedback

I have received lots of very helpful feedback on my front page, contents page and double page spread.
For my front page:

I have been told to - 

• Added a pug
• Use a more rounded font for the masthead
• Stick to the left third rule
• Cover lines must be smaller 
• Cover lines must had spaces in between
• The bar code could be vertical and up the side of the magazine

For my contents page:

I have been told to - 

• Use a better quality main image as this one is quite blurry
• Remember to include an actual section for the main artist because there isn't one
• Don't include the masthead, just use an identical font and size to type 'contents'
• Use spaces between all of white text boxes or alternatively don't use white text boxes
• Make sure not to 'turtlise' the images (have parts cut off or uneven)
• Include more stories

For my double page spread:

I have been told to - 

• Make the text smaller to make more a story
• Ensure that the title is the same font/colour/size as the masthead
• Re-position S.O.D. to where her name is mentioned in the article
• Always check spelling, punctuation and grammar
• Get rid of any artist action e.g. *winks* - this is unprofessional 

I will take on these ideas for improvement in my magazine to make it successful.